The campus, which is believed to be a place for students to gain knowledge, but as the world gets globalized, many business centers have moved into the campus. Students enjoy the commercial environment, but some people think that the commercial environment will have negative effect to the students. I think the campus should be pure.

大學校園，被人們認為是學生學習知識的地方，但是隨著全球化，很多商業中心搬進了校園。學生享受著商業環境，但是一些人覺得商業環境會給學生帶來負面影響。我覺得校園應該要純凈。

On the one hand, campus is the place for students to learn the knowledge. The school should create the environment which is suitable for the students to study. Such as the school can open the shops to sell the books, or the things which are related to the study.

一方面，大學校園是學生學習知識的地方。學校應該創造適合學生學習的環境。比如學校可以開賣書的店，或者賣和學習有關的東西。

On the other hand, the commercial centers will distract students’ attention from their study. The shop, the theater and other shops have built in some campus, it makes the students can’t focus their minds, they just want to finish their class and then go shopping. The original purpose has been forgotten by the students.

另一方面，商業中心會讓學生從學習上分心。商店，電影院和其他的店在一些學校已經建立了，這讓學生無法集中精神，他們會想要快點上完課，然后去購物。學生忘記了他們上學的初衷。

Though the commercialize of campus brings students convenience, it is not suitable to let those shops open, students’ main duty is to study and the commercialize will interfere them.

雖然校園的商業化給學生帶來了方便，但是讓這些店開在校園里是不合適的，學生的主要任務是學習，商業化會干擾他們。

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